It's sad but a good poem

Emotional...well worded apology...sad...I hope if you wrote this for someone they accepted it and forgave you...with this,how could they not?wonderful!

Strong! Nicely done. The sorry's actually don't bother me, I thought they would because there are a lot of sorry's in this poem, but nope.. it didn't. So nice work
5/5
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[argh, stupid comment, I just like the poem =P ]

It flowed really well, and the emotions were clear. I could almost picture someone on their knees begging for forgiveness with this poem.
It was very powerful.
I enjoyed the repetition, and the mystery of what exactly your asking forgiveness for.

Excellent,
--Elly.

This is really sad but well spoken.
you did a great job of writing this.
:]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

This is really sad but well spoken.
you did a great job of writing this.
:]

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I rele love it!!! 5/5 great job! keep it up!

Aww so sad, emotional, but very cute same time. I hope that the person forgiven to you, this really shows how much you care. Touching!
5/5 Keep writing!

That was so simple thoughts..and very well expressed

Thanks for the comment..i love this poem...good job

Whoa, I love it.
I thought the 'sorry!" would be too much all those times; but I dig it. (:

you've done a wonderful job with this, nojoke. It has great emotion, flow, and I liked your word choice.

I love reptition, but usually not one word like that in the same place every line - but, boy you've got it downpat. Amazing job.

I'm like stunned at how much I liked it.
Lol.

This is deeply touching and filled with emotions, it sound so sincere, like it's written straight from the heart. Captivating poem, filled with equal amounts of sadness and beauty.
It has good flow and nice rhyming scheme.
Keep up!

Not my faverit form of poem writing, But the poem was good. Keep writing. L. S. Moore

Awe. the ending was beautiful.
and the poem as a whole was simply amazing.
and i like your rhyme scheme. :]
5/5.

I love it! <3

Wow!! i cant imagine the person you wrote this for. this poem might be short but its soo painful to read sorry every line. its like you are telling the reader, that you are a mistake. You are not! Dont ever feel that way. KEEP EXPRESSING! youre poems is like a high! :D sasha

Simple and a nice way 2 tell sorry...

AMAZING! your such a talented writer!! keep writing or else i would have nothing to do on here so keep it up so i can read more!!

Its so simple
yet so meaningful
love it 5/5

Great poem!! good flow with your words!!! excellent 5/5 :):)