Forget Me Not

by Always and Never   Nov 29, 2007


Promise me you won't forget me,
Remember me as the girl, who's heart you broke.
With every look you gave me,
And with every word you spoke.

Every peice of skin you touched,
It turns into wilted flesh,
With every kiss from your lips to mine...
Makes me wish I were dead.

With every breath I took..
I took them just for you,
With every beat of my broken heart,
The love for you so true.

With every thought of you in my head,
I thought i would go insane,
You've told me babe, its over,
I wish it could stay the same.

With everytime you took my hand,
I felt on top of the world.
But now as i watch you walk away,
I feel like a little girl.

And now I lay here all alone,
Your smile, your eyes i see.
Your touch, your body, so soft and warm
Will no longer comfort me.

**Its not finished, but let me know what you think, and please check out some of my other poems.** I will do the same for you, thank you

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    I really liked this one! alot of emotion, im recently feeling this way =(

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Hey it's good where it is now. I like it. If you read it with passion it sounds like something you hear in a snapping club when people snap there fingers for a good poem. Yeah you end it on a dark note and everyone is snapping lol. Great poem
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by Neta

    I really like your poem it has a lot of emotion into it as well the ryhming is perfect
    good job oh and totalle relatable

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by gis

    I love it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    That was really good. i really liked it alot. i can relate cuz thats how i felt when me an my ex broke up. i hope your ok. good job. :-)