This was sad.
but it couldve been a little longer.
but still goood. :]

also you have a mis-spelling.
the 2nd the last sentence it should be *told.
:]

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

ps: sorry it took so long to get back with a comment just my computer was acting up and wouldnt let me go to this site.

No it was the site it wouldnt let alot of ppl get on!!!

So sad =[

im going to read an comment more of your poems tomorrow k
xx

Hi

so sad and full of pain. i hope you people stop cutting yourselves.

good luck
Her Guardian

This poem was intresting.. but i seemed a bit forced in sum areas..

my fav stanza was

It started with a test
but it didn't end with the best
i fell to the ground
no one around

if u make sum changes this poem could have a lot of potential.. nice poem

Good write. a lot of emotion and pain is well portrayed. 5/5

Wow...This is a good poem it describes me i give it a 5!! =]

This was short, but full of emotion. Great poem. The ending was a bit off though. 4/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

I love this poem...sad but thats what love can do to you....!!!=)

The title is just simple, but really drew me to read this one. And no wonder, it's another beautiful poem written by you. And I really love the middle stanza of this poem. Great one, of course worth 5/5!!!

Now this poem I like, something I can relate to. The words flow quite nicely and was a pleasure to read. Well done!