Magical, beautiful, excellent, and everything in between! This poem was truly amazing and I fell in love with it! I can relate in so many ways, I felt this way whenever I first saw my boyfriend Tyler, and the first time we kissed.. he wouldn't leave my mind whenever I read this. You worked some magic with this poem and definitely deserve a 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

This poem is really amazing. Keep on writing. 5/5

dan

This is more than amazing! You discribe it so wonderfully that even the ppl that never felt like this would feel it while they're reading your poem.. I'm seriously speachless..
take care x

Awww, darling! This poem made my heart flutter whenever I read it! This was an all around amazing poem! No joke! I can definitely relate.. I thought of my beloved boyfriend Tyler whenever I read this. This is what happened to me, except I first saw him whenever he moved to my school and came into my World History class lol. Totally and completely beautiful. If someone disagrees than I will personally hunt them down and beat them with a stick! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~