by Torrence Dec 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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Unfolding in dust and mold |
by S R P
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I liked this poem - it was extremely well written and the metaphors were amazing. I particularly enjoyed the emotion behind the poem, as the more emotion it is, the better the poems seem to flow. Very nice job, 5/5 |
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