Glimpse Into My Soul

by Brittney Follett   Dec 14, 2007


Just to look upon that handsome, loving face
Is enough to make my weak heartbeat race.
Being enveloped in those soft, strong arms,
Giving into all his adorable little charms.

Placing a kiss on those mysterious velvet lips
Feeling the steady sway of those strong hips
Sensing the love no matter how far the distance
Meeting him, my life's never been the same since.

This man is my love; this man is my life
Maybe I'll be worthy to be called his wife
This is definitely love that I am seeing.
I've given everything to this perfect being.

Life has thrown me so many curves and many trials,
But being with him, makes that smile stay for a while
I'm a little odd but he's in denial, (just a little stubborn)
But his simple words have given my world a huge turn.

Baby you are mine, I hope you know that I love you
But know that no matter what, I'll be yours too.
I know we can stay together even if we're far apart.
Justin you are the man that has entranced my heart.

Copyright Brittney Follett

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Simply amazing my dear. I just fell in love with this poem. Every single line, every word, wow.. was just wonderful. This entire poem was wonderfully written and I couldn't have done a better job myself. You definitely could your point across. I could feel the love seeping out of this poem, amazing. I couldn't help but think about my own boyfriend whenever I read this. Great job sweetie. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    All of it was a bit off to me but the third stanza. it just went so perfectly - like, the flow - word choice, emotion. . ..perfection.
    But, other than that it was only an okay poem.

    4/5

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