Black Hole Inside of Your Soul

by xXxIf You Only KnewxXx   Dec 14, 2007


There's a fire burning in your eyes,
A hard determination to make it.
A set plan within your soul
To gather the world and take it.

There's loneliness behind your mask
And you're working to hide it deep.
What you can't fake is what I see;
The happy facade you can't keep.

There's a black hole inside of your soul.
The scars of your past are real.
You're trying hard to fulfill your role.
The pain that you feel is real.

You drag yourself through each day
With a fake smile plastered on your face.
You think 'When will it all be ok?'
Getting dizzy...you're a head case.

You feel the rage building under your skin
And it takes all of your will to fight.
The line in your mind has blurred
Between what's wrong and right.

There's a black hole inside of your soul.
The scars of your past are real.
You're trying hard to fulfill your role.
The pain that you feel is real.

*definitely not done, please vote/comment*

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  • 14 years ago

    by xXxIf You Only KnewxXx

    That makes no sense. How does a word not rhyme with the same word? Honestly. And don't tell me to change my writing. That's annoying.

  • 15 years ago

    by xx

    There's a black hole inside of your soul.
    The scars of your past are real.
    You're trying hard to fulfill your role.
    The pain that you feel is real.

    I think that you should change "The pain that you feel is real." to "The pain that you feel, you can't conceal." Because "real" doesn't rhyme with "real". But it's just a suggestion. Great poem.