This is realluy great, from first line to the last line. I especially liked "I'm driven by a sense of hope
of reincarnation of something once lost" x

Keep writing things will get get easier, this is good work xxx

Beautiful work of art

This brought tears to my rims of my lids too

"If someone world look deep into my eyes"

I really like this poem although i think you meant "would" maybe?

Great poem 5/5

Thinks for the comment on mine =)

Noelle

This was awsome, it really is, you made such a dark beautiful image... I liked from the first line, your very talented

Keep up the good work

-mello

Look at my profile pic and u will understand how much i relate to this awesome piece
5/5 WOWWWWWWWWWW

I can really relate 2 this

you really are very talented!!!

thanx for the comment =]