Suicide

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Dec 15, 2007


I'm so sorry i couldn't stay.
i tried my best i didn't mean
to always get in the way.
I'm sorry i believed your words
i just thought you meant them
I'm watching the clock I'm running
out of time.

Look at your TV soon i will be
on prime time.everyone will
cry and ask why i died.i was in extreme
pain .my fear was intense it was so
insane.maybe you didn't mean
what you said but its to late
and i promise you wont forget
the date.

you told me lies that i thought
were so real.you said you would always
be around well look at me now.I'm so
cold Ive turned blue maybe soon
you will join me too.I didn't mean
to commit this sin god please forgive
my suicide.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very emotional piece and you really put your heart into it. the flow was flawless. And your descriptions were deep. The iamgery was intense. And. just. .amaing. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, very powerful piece. It has a great imagery and the flow fit just right. Again, the strutcture is a bit off, but it's still a good piece. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I feel this poem. Every line brings more and more intensity and feeling. You express so much here. This deserves a 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    I can relate to this poem as many more people on this site probably can.This poem was very original though and I really enjoyed reading it.The flow was pretty good and so was your rhyming.Good job.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    This is really sad. wow this was intense, i love this one alot, it was powerful and emotional.
    :]

    keep up the good work.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

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