Aww.. how come no one has commented on this!? People! common! lol, this was great! i love this, you don't see many poems about redemption or religion. and im glad that you did. great work! i loved this poem! wonderful structure and rhyming! :]

A poem about god... i think it's about him.. the last stanza gave me a clue..
"You will always be there
Whenever I'm in need
Talking to you in prayer
Will be a blissful deed. "

i've nver read something like this.. i thot it was about a boy.. truly religious! great poem! your poems are unique btw.. =]

Wow, thats really good, it reminds me of my best friend, shes always there for me! Great job! i love how easily it flows!

Beautiful poem. I'm adding it to my fave poems. Thanks!

Wow this was amazing....it's good to have this feeling that you described in this poem
A definite 5/5

Beautiful poem about religion..... it shows the true connextion that God is always there and He will never let you down

Awesome poem!
I Love it *cries*
You words come alive.
The world is seriously cold,but we have him!
;)
5/5

Speechless that was so deep.. simple words with depth is hard to portray.. my head drawing pictures of which i never though could beautiful write 5/5 thank you for writing it

I enjoyed this poem the only problem I can see is in the first stanza here should be hear over all it is very good