Thats amazing 5/5

Wonderful job.. the emotion was really strong and expressed beautifully. my favorite is "Time pounced on my heart so gently
Erasing the lullabies of familiar voices
That calmed a frantic mind
Now heavy thoughts have taken hold"

great job!

ps. thanks for the comment on my poem i'm glad you enjoyed it ;]

Wow! excellent!

Cool poem x

This kept me reading until the very end it si an amazing poem you should read and comment my poems

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silent..
it's that good 100/5

Woww!
this was so amazing.
so deep and beautiful.
i always love a write that comes from the heart, and this definately came from your heart.
job well done.

The words you used to say what you needed to was amazing I LOVED IT

I can so relate to this poem