The girl i cant have

by Cale   Dec 20, 2007


The girl i like don't like me the same.
All the people around me just think im insane.

I cant get this girl off my mind!
All i can think about is how shes one of a kind!

When she smiles at me im blown away.
When i talk to her i cant think of what to say.
But every time i see her i hope she looks my way.

This girl I don't think feels the way I do.
I guess thats why sometimes I get so blue.

Her beauty is like a artist's work of art.
And her voice is the kind that melts a guys heart.

When i hear her name i get this feeling inside.
When i talk to her my feelings are so hard to hide.

I dream of the day that we will get together!
Having a love that will last forever.

But all i can do is sit and wait.
And hope that our love will be fate.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I really liked how you wrote this poem, the flow and wording is perfect. When I read it I could feel the emotions being in this situation makes you feel, I've been there, never give up hope if it's what you really want. Wonderful job 5/5 :)
    ~*Angel*~

  • 14 years ago

    by charles

    Good write! I felt exactly the same way about someone "way back when" so I can definitely relate to this one...

  • 14 years ago

    by charles

    Good write. May sound funny, but I thought exactly the same thing "way back when" so I can relate to this one....

  • 14 years ago

    by danielle

    I love your poem!!!! its full of emtion and its really sweet it seemed like you like that girl it was really good 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sarah Nicole

    THiS ONE iS REALLYYy GOoD i WiSH A GYyYE WOULD RiGGHT THiS FOR ME