Awwz rele cute...keep up the good work!!! lol i luvs ya! <3

This was rlly sweet.. i liked it alot..
very touching also..
it would b much better tho if it was in poem forma

This poem confused me a bit
where did you go?
what did the ring mean to you?
those questions you might want to try to answer in your next piece of work
I liked how you talked about what happened
but I feel like your holding back on emotion
heres a tip for you
when something like this happens
and your crying or you feel overjoyed
whatever the emotion
write right then
dont hesitate
it really helps
3/5
kaila

Awe. that was a beautiful poem.
sad, but sweet. it's a cute poem.
and i like how you ended it. :] 5/5.

I agree with kaila, i was quite confused on many parts, and couldnt pick up the beat of it at all sorry

Wow...sad but cute..i like it! =]

This is sad.. but it would be sadder if you wrote every single feeling you have in detail... just an advice.. this is good =] keep writing!

Ummm so this poem is rele dumb god its just so ewwwwwwww

lol jk i love ya

<3 i love you silly