This is a great poem. The flow is smoth and the the emotions shine through.....L.S. Moore

Ouch.. wow that waz a great poem.. very nicely written and i kinda kno wat itz lik to lose sum1 over sumthin so stupid and meaningless.. oh and by the way, i only capitalize the very beginning of a stanza.. nuthin else.. and the poemz i hav on here r really nuthin i hav a hwole book but i'm too lazy to put them..=p.. well keep up the writing=)

Anthony

This poem is filled with emotion...
short, yet straight to the point...=)
The write is flawless, only the last stanza kind of confused me a little bit...
didn't you mean "have broke up"?
not sure, though...
amazing poem...=)
*keep on*
isabel

Flawless and smooth, well expressed emotions, nice!

Missing someone is killing me too ,so I can relate to how you are feeling.I really liked this write ,very well done.

Awe. sad, but sweet poem. .
I know what this is like.
I went through this a few times. :[
And the emotion was well portrayed. :]
5/5.

Awwz that is so sad!!! ive been cheated on...and the guy that did it realized he made the biggest mistake and i did end up comen back to him....maybe ur ex will realize...taht u did it cuz at the time u didnt realize how much you cared for him but after you guys were apart you knew that you loved him so much! great poem though!!! keep up the great work!

<3 i love you silly

Lol my this i can relate to also but in a dif way....i read it from my exs point of very b/c he wants me back so bad. lol back i cant take him back (cheated on me with my sister) but yeah anyways the poem was really good short sweet and to the point. i liked it

Awww....this poem is sweet, and sad at the same time

:[ can relate to this one too. i lost my ex to cheating. I also didn't realise how much he meant to me. Well written and very emotive
Taegan Emily
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Well I really loved it. That suchs that you cheated, but everything happens for a reason right? Well, I loved it though! The emotion in this was deep. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

The short lines worked for me here. It held some emotion and flowed nicely. Nothing seemed forced. I loved the imagery and how I could relate with the emotions you described. Not the cheating part but the way he makes you. Well done *5/5*