by Hollywood Dec 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
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I never new that you could mean so much to me |
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This poem is great, but a bit surface. Your topic is a good one, and i am sure it is filled with tons of emotion, as a reader I want to see that emotion more! Often times figurative language, similes, metaphors, and taking advantage of the connotation of words can really bring the poem up a level. Great poem, wonderful start. |
by halie
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Lol wow talk about way to much in common!! |
by CWG
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Very sweet touching poem and very well written. 5/5 |
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Whoa we are so in the same situation... |
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I HATE falling for my friends, its sumthin that happens all too much, ugh, good poem tho |