Sometimes our experiences are where we draw our inspiration from, this is a great example of that. So many questions are left to be answered in this poem, and I think it works that way. Very nice write. O, and by the way this wasn't a favor it was a pleasure! Keep writing, find your voice.
11 years ago
by Im not broken anymore
This is very deep also its very good... You really put emotions in your poems and thats what makes them so good hope not all the things you write about is true... 5/5
People defer from one another and most of the times not all the people we meet are good, I think this one is about being so strong despite the reality of the world that not all would understand us. KUDOS Sarah! I really enjoyed this one.