Comments : On her own

  • 11 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I could tell that this poem was filled with such powerful emotion from the first couple lines. I loved the flow and the suspenseful-ness.

    Brooke<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good pome with good ending xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Sometimes our experiences are where we draw our inspiration from, this is a great example of that. So many questions are left to be answered in this poem, and I think it works that way. Very nice write. O, and by the way this wasn't a favor it was a pleasure! Keep writing, find your voice.

    Your friend
    Chris

  • 11 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is very deep also its very good... You really put emotions in your poems and thats what makes them so good hope not all the things you write about is true... 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow such a tragic poem but very well written. the emotions so deep i feel like i am there with you. 5/5

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sara Sutton

    Beautiful.<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew

    Hey this is another nicely penned piece, i like the way it kept me asking for more, its like a story that one enjoys reading.. Good work, keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew

    Hey this is another nicely penned piece, i like the way it kept me asking for more, its like a story that one enjoys reading.. Good work, keep it up

  • 1 year ago

    by Khai Montegrande

    People defer from one another and most of the times not all the people we meet are good, I think this one is about being so strong despite the reality of the world that not all would understand us. KUDOS Sarah! I really enjoyed this one.