Wow! Well done, I love the story... sad but really strong and full of alot of emotion! The flow and words were really well done!
Keep up the great work!
Jade

*Could you read Christmas promise?*

Wow, this poem is sad, yet so beautiful. Nice choice of words. The feeling from this portrayed so much emotiong. Great poem! 5/5

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I love this poem even though its sad.Its nicely written and i understand it 100%.I can't say that i ever been in love like that yet but hopefully that person will love me back much as i loved them...great poem...!!!...=)

Well done.! :)
it made me sad, seems how i understand EVERY emotion you put in here. and im sorry your being put through this.

keep expressing it in poetry.
make people feel your pain and happiness throughout every word.

i can sure feel it.

<3.
keep up the good work.
your an AMAZING poet.

---TayTay:]]

Well doNe kEep up Da Good work..now ur in my fave list..

I loved it. Your an awesome writer. Keep up the good work

Wow this poem is just really good. I really liked it alot. You have lots of great talent

I almost cried - I don't do that with just any poem [though I cry a lot. Lol]

You did a wonderful job with this poem.
Great flow, great word choice, and great emotion.

I'msorry, btw.
I'm sure you and her, neither, deserved this.

Wonderful job, though darling.
:]
5/5

Very well done. Almost made me cry ! Lol.
It was so very sad, but in a beautiful way.
It had a lot of emotion, good flow, nice rhyming.

Good job, dear :]

My favorite part: .. AMAZING.

The pain inside I felt,
The ripping at my chest,
I lost a part of myself that night,
Now in pieces I rest.

Wow i really like it..geat work hun!

Wow the emotional power of your singular voice in this piece really shouted out your apology 5/5 =( im sorry your relationship did not work out but you shouldn't dwell on it or it will hurt even more. and im also putting this piece into my favourites

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

Oh that was perfect and i can feel the sincerity! i enjoyed all the lines from the beginning up to the last lines it was very inspiring! (well, love doesnt matter and specially age doesnt matter between two people who are in love to each other!) great story and very strong message i can relate at the same time.. very enjoyable though! keep it up! 5/5

This poem makes me want to cry, but it's so well written I can't help but love it. Someday you'll find someone who deserves your love, but until then, I'll always be there for you ... I also like how your little note at the bottom also rhymes, lol.

Wow...really good, reminds me alot of what happened between my and this one guy i fell for. but good word choice and rhyme and just an al together great poem....(do any of my 4 latest plz)

This is endlessly heartfelt and touching... It brought tears to my eyes. Whole poem is filled with tones of overwhelming sadness, and it is greatly written, with excellently expressed emotions.
Keep up!

Its a sad,beautiful one..love it

Excellent, another job well done, i do hope you continue writing poems because this is just amazing

xxo

Wow really good poem hunn you really show the reader how hurt you are i loved the wording 5/5 <33

WOWW!!!
Really amazin one
this was my favorite part:

I'm sorry I can't change that,
I'd give up everything to try,
I'm sorry I tear up at night,
When I sit and wonder, why?

keep one writin' 5/5 :)

Short, simple and right to the point ... I loved it. Also, I'm sorry if this is something you've really had to live through ... 5/5.