Ana
by she Dec 28, 2007
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I'm the voice in your head telling you,you shouldn't have eaten that. |
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16 years ago
Another great poem
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16 years ago
by FallenAngel
Your poetry is very good, but the bad grammar and abbreviations ruin it. (e.g saying 'ur' instead of you are or 'you're' , saying 'u' instead of 'you'.)
If those were fixed, it'd be a very beautiful poem. -
16 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Babe this is good, its how you feel and what came out leave it as that :) a very true poem xxx
