One of my favorites simple but has a message with just a few words~keep it up
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This was amazing! Simple with so much meaning! It was beautifully written amazing job! Thank you for your message on my poem :)

Omg!! i love this one soo much!! this makes me wanna sky dive or something, lol!! =] truely a great job!!

Yo this is good for a short poem! it has a nice message in it.. and your word choice was excellent!
my fav stanza:
"Sleep with the sun
Dance with the moon
Swim with the sharks
Life will end soon"

fantastic poeM! nothing more to say to that =]

Random poem but expresses life: Random yet unperdictable and like each verse who knows what could be found next.

I LOVE this poem!!! And completely agree with it of course, really sweet and inspirational. My favourite is the bit about striving for imperfection. And the bit about laughing at yourself. I find myself doing that every day =) Very very clever. 5/5!

Em xXx

Love this.....this is really who i wanna be. terribley horribley this is who i wanna be.

AMAZING! this is the way life should be lived!.. i couldnt have said it any better myself. great job! and thanks for the comment =)

These are my favourite style of poems.
Short stanzas+Lines. I write them alot, I liked to try fit so much, into so little.
Let the readers mind tear it apart looking for hidden meaning.
When there is none, But the reader will find some. We always do.

"Lets walk on air
Smile at the pain
Cry for the joy
Lose what we gain"

Reminds me of two songs.
One by the wombats; One by Train.

"Strive for imperfection
Claim all mistakes
Never give up
Do whatever it takes."

Favouritee.

I love simple rhyme.
It creates simple flow, that slips of your tongue.
It's an easy read, and this made me smile.

Well done. :]

I love this it has a great message which u get across very clearly

"Scream out your lungs"
thought it sounded better "Scream your lungs out"

Only my opinion though.

I liked this poem, definitely relates to my own life. I hate planning things out, and I enjoy randomness. Shame? What is that?.. lol
Yeah, I don't have much of it.

The title caught my eye, I must admit. Worth the read!.. Keep it up :)

I loved this piece, it was beautiful. i really enjoyed reading it. yer a wonderful poet, keep up the good work!!

Love this one, great poem...
read some of mine, let me know what you think! :)