This was a good poem.
its kinda like sad in a way.
not being mean or anything.
but you gave up a sweet guy.
to go back to a guy you loved.
just to do the off and on again thing.
certain guys never change so good luck.
im not saying this as a bad thing or trying to get you mad or anything im just saying what i know and stuff, im not a expert or anything but just saying.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Your poem is so simple but I can relate to it. It's great job!!! You deserve 5/5!~!!

First, the little heart things in your titles may cause the reader to not read your work. But I liked the title, although a little cliche it is still a good one for this peice.

The minute you found out
I had someone knew
You told me
That you still loved me

A beautiful stanza. I think that everyone has had this happen to them.

You said Find someone knew>> new
You did that twice. Lol. Silly mistake. But the overall story of the poem was classic and something everyone will be able to relate to. Great job!

Amber :]]

I like this poem and i know how it is with that on and off things boys can have the craziest reasons to be breaking up with you.....=)....keep writing!!

Wow this explains me this very moment ha wow I love this you did great & oh by the way of my understanding is this going on or what cause if it is send me a private message

Wow this explains me this very moment ha wow I love this you did great & oh by the way of my understanding is this going on or what cause if it is send me a private message

Sweet poem, deffinately something I can relate to, well written

Okay I liked it alot
I can tell this poem means a lot to you
although I have mixed emotions on the last stanza
only because I wouldn't want you to get hurt
because a lot of my friends have been through the same thing
so please be careful
poem wise there were some parts that had forced rhyme I thought
and it messed up the flow
but I enjoyed it
5/5
kaila
take care

I liked this one.. but it seemed kinda forced and u had sum miss spelling. but besides that, it was greaT

Sad. simple. sweet. beautiful. and amazing.
everyone goes tthrough this at times
and it suckz. :[ i been in the same predicament before.
sort of. some things with me were a lil different.
but the idea was there. great write. 5/5.

I liked how it was a story and I could follow along nicely without getting lost which made it interesting. I do think you could add a little more emotion to it beside the simple "I love you" Like why do you love him and how does he make you feel. Well done.

Another great write! You have a lot of talent and I really enjoy your style! I think many many people have been here before, you did a great job of portraying the idea! Wonderful! Keep it up!

Aww...... i love this poem.. great job.. the flow was nice and the emotion was strong... good choice of words

Very sad but well written another good poem,found no mistakes...keep writing..=)