Never-ending b.f.

by thegirltheydontsee   Dec 29, 2007


A shower with love
Never ending
To talk for me
When I dont know what to say
A backbone so strong
Its never bending
To pull me aside
When you know something aint right
Youre a good best friend
To wipe my tears
When they cant stop
Do help be be better
When im bein a jerk
To understand what I feel
When I cant dont know what I feel
A hug so tight
You cant breath
Youre a true best friend
To show me right
When ive done wrong
Someone to tell my secrets too
Who I know wont tell
To stick with me in the good
And stick with me tough the bad
To be a loving caring amazing wonderful good blessing,
And for me to be a loving caring amazing wonderful good blessing to you.
Youe a never ending best friend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    Ok, i like this poem, it's good!

    just a few spelling/grammatical errors to fix:

    Do [To?] help be[me?] be better
    When im bein[g] a jerk
    To understand what I feel
    When I *cant dont*[?] know what I feel
    A hug so tight
    You cant breath[e]
    Youre a true best friend
    To show me right
    When ive done wrong
    Someone to tell my secrets too
    Who I know wont tell
    To stick with me in[through?] the good
    And stick with me tough[through] the bad

    ok, so i put [?] when im not sure what word you were trying to use, and [*with a word*?] when i was making a suggestion. hope this helps!

    good job!

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