You Cried, You Cut, You Died.

by Jenn   Dec 29, 2007


You cried because you had to,
You cried becuase it was right;
You cried because you couldn't deal with it anymore.

You cut because you were sad,
You cut because it hurt;
You cut because you couldn't deal with it anymore.

You died because nobody cared,
You died because you cried;
You died because you cut;
You died because you couldn't deal with it anymore.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I liked the first stanza and the title fits your poem really well but I think you could have gotten into more depth with it just trying to help you with opinions nice poem though 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    Comment my poems please. give them good comments and feed backs