I like the way you started off. Hidden frowns with painted smiles that was great. It flowed real good. 5/5
-vino

I really like this poem.. good job. I liked the emotion in it.. 5/5

I reali like this poem... u r a reali good poem writer =].. i think one of the main reasons i love your poems to much is not only that they are reali good but i can relate to most if not all of them that u write...
i hope that everything starts to get better for you...
keep up the good poem writing =]
5/5

Awesome poem. sometimes i feel the same, you know? its like mood swings only sorta different, you know? anyway, like i said, awesome poem. please read some of mine, comment and/or rate if u want to. ill return the favor!
lostsoul13

Thank u for finally puttin up soma ur poems. :]

My favourite part,
"Hidden frowns behind painted on smiles,
silent tears that go on for miles.
Broken hearts full of fears,
cries for help that no one hears."
great job, but i sincerely hope that you don't feel this way.

Hidden frowns behind painted smiles

amazing. how i feel..beautiful

But people are always caught up in their own lives,
that they don't notice who makes friends with a knife.
those two lines are so powerful u did a great job conveying real emotion in this well done it would be good to see more from you hun 5/5 d xxx

Wow.
So true.
People are too busy, too see those who are in pain...

5/5
Nice job

Loved the emotion in this piece!

Keep up the good work!

Danielle
xx
5/5

Nice poem :)
5/5

Great metaphores, i like it much ,
i will read more and comment it seem you have much talent here
!!
:)

But people are always caught up in their own lives,
that they don't notice who makes friends with a knife.
It's always the people you least expect to be sad,
but people don't care and that's to bad

Loved it!! :) :D