It's You

by FridusBlueheaven   Dec 29, 2007


Title : It's You
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Million ways I've taken through the hardest day
Heart simply gone and said it will never stay
Have I forgotten about the things that they say?
Proud to be alone, but why keep thinking that way

Hundred times I've tried, but only once I did it
I've got what I want, but never got what I need
Have too many things, but life is still incomplete
Been with everyone, but it's you I want to be with

Another season gone, but my heart will still feel
I almost forgot that I've gone through the wrong deal
If I don't want it, but why keep trying to make it real
If I'm tired with it all, why I want to love you still

Time's getting harsh and we're only got a few
I've done with my task, but haven't paid my due
If it's wrong, why this heart wants to make it true
If it's somebody else, why I keep thinking of you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I could relate with the last lines so much. If somebodys occupies both your heart and mind then theyre supposed to be there. As much as you try to block them out .. they just reappear. I learned that the hard way. You cant ignore strong emotions so pursue the one you love cause life is too short not to take risk. Well done .. I truly did enjoy this piece because it brought back memories. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Aw this is a heartfelt poem... i liked it.. but in some parts,the way you worded it made it kinda hard to understand... but overall it was a nice poem..still 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by candice

    I like your writing style

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought the ending was amazing. You have such a great word choice through out tyhis all, it was incredible.The rhyming was great and the flow was very smooth, a well deserved 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Beautifully written!
    only thought is for the first lines of the first 2 stanzas
    change to "A million"
    and "hundreds of times"

    it sounds as though it would flow better
    5/5

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