Your Eyes

by FridusBlueheaven   Dec 29, 2007


Title : Your Eyes
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Your eyes still shining through my blackout heart
Still show me sincerity, right there from the start
Another blink and I can't resist the power of tear
If I could have a little more time to be here

The night is up and the moon shining so bright
But I know your eyes always have a brighter light
The right place, but I know that I should go far
And you know that I will always be your star

Your eyes are more than any eye can shine
The beauty inside are too hard to define
Blinded lights are just too hard to recline
But I must go, so I can't make them mine

Interesting moves, if I have a longer chance
And if it's all not about a stupid distance
Probably I could have more time to dance
I'm sorry if everything is just a happenstance

Blink for a second, but you made me feels like year
You're too far, but then I can feel you so damn near
But the shadows are gone, they're closely disappeared
A diamond shine, always reminds me of your beautiful tear

Your eyes, they'll always be something so special
Your eyes, they'll always be something but crucial
Blink once more, you put my life to a magical
But at last, I'm sorry for everything but superficial

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Aww this was just beautiful and heartfelt. I loved the imagery and how you described the beauty behind the eyes of the person you love ... breathtaking. The words you used fit the mood and concept flawlessly and were enjoyable to read. The first stanza just hooked me and I wanted to read more. Well done in creating this piece *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Another great write :) I always love reading your stuff lol I wish my boy could write like this, occasionally you through in words I havent even heard of and I'm like " i gotta look it up" so thanks 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very beautiful and well written.
    I really like this poem and it was
    really cute. 5/5
    <3tay

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    This was a good piece indeed the only rough spot for my taste though was the last stanza it needs some work but overall this poem was written beautifully nice job
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by babyPB

    Impressive.

    The title caught my attention since everybody tells me that my eyes are the best. :]

    I love the way you give descriptions and use the words for every stanza. It's deep in a way it's not. I love the whole point. I LOVE THiS POEM; the 1st best poem I read this year for 08. :]
    5/5

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