September love :D

by Eric   Dec 30, 2007


They met on a day in September
its a day he will always remember
he started off feeling down and alone
all he did was sit in his home
he met this girl who made him laugh
but he knew she'd break his heart in half
he knew it was love at first sight
or he just wanted some afternoon delight
the next day he asked her out
she said yes with no doubt
a week had passed, he knew she was the one
she made him smile when she called him Hun
later that night she had broke his heart
it was off to a brand new start
he was never the same after that night
his mother began to worry with fright
he would go in his room and lock his door
he did not care anymore
he took a knife
and began to slice
he saw the blood, it made him cry
he just wanted so bad to die
he knew he still loved he, he always would
like a best friend only could
she was the only one that made him feel this way
he thought about her night and day
they went out again
he knew she was the one so he gave it another shot
the second time she left he started to get hot
he cleared everything in his path
he mother couldn't do the math
he was in love, his fury took over him
he would take the switch and make the lights go dim
people laughed in his face because he was depressed
all he had going for him was stress,stress,stress
he didn't wanna get hurt again but he loved her too much so he went for it again
this was all a game for her,a little tease
he couldn't take it no more, He'd get weak and dropped to his knees
this is where he is now
some people might say how ?
how can he love her after all this shit
but in his heart theres a candle that was lit
wen he heard her name he'd look around
wen she wasn't there he was buried into the ground
this is the end
the end of him
its just to bad he couldn't win
this is a note to her so read it
later on life you may need it
you may not think i do
but baby,
i do love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Eric, lol I forgot to comment this before. Well anyways.. I love this poem.. it's really good. =)

    -(YourBestFriend)Taylor

  • 16 years ago

    by rachel

    Wow. nicely done

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    WOW..Now thats what you call true love..I love my boyfriend but no matter how good he makes me feel if he ever crushed me...I wouldn't look at him the same

    Anywaaaays this poem was Excellent <3

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