We Dance On

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Jan 1, 2008


I love that sound
clear water rain coming down
wetting the ground
we dance on

some days fast
and some days slow
but one thing I know
we dance on

now we're dancing
all I hear is your heartbeat and the rain . hitting this cold dark street
. we dance on

And we dance around
a brilliant waltz
but then I wake up
for it was all false

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Thanx so much for commenting on one of my poems. i loved tihs! two thumbs up! xoxox

  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Thats so sad! that something that makes you happy turns out to be a dream....4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany Fleenor

    I adore this writing of yours.
    very touching and inspiring.

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    This is great! -two thumbs up-
    :)

  • 16 years ago

    by IML

    That was a good poem. I liked how it all went together. =) thanks for your comment too.
    You are a talented one.
    better than I haha.