Dead On Arrival (Rondeau)

by Kenny   Jan 2, 2008


~Written For a Contest~

As my heart then ripped apart by a sudden change of stare
Glares revealing reality along the edge of despair
Confusion heightened, shattered truth I cannot ignore
His hands entangled with yours, cold tears flow for more
Raised the pain so deeply, lost in hearts pieces I declare

Memories that have come to past, you don't bother to care
Those sweet kisses of love in the dark, finger tips on your hair
Preceding the altar, pledged to live life together forevermore
As my heart then ripped apart

Void road I'll stroll, to the seen reality I'm now aware
Memories will be buried, will remain forgotten, I swear
Pictures soon to be scattered and torn along our floor
Smokescreen of distrust will glide as you open our door
Leaving promises rotten and broken, suspicion to wear
As my heart then ripped apart

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Rondeau
A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
same metrical length).

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  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    It is pleasing to the eyes and mind to read poems like yours the first time in this windy morning.
    "Void road I'll stroll, to the seen reality I'm now aware
    Memories will be buried, will remain forgotten, I swear
    Pictures soon to be scattered and torn along our floor
    Smokescreen of distrust will glide as you open our door
    Leaving promises rotten and broken, suspicion to wear
    As my heart then ripped apart." You are very talented. You poured out emotive words that captured the eyes and thoughts. All i can say is continue writing. Very well done, 5/5, kel.