Death

by victoria   Jan 2, 2008


It is creeping up slowly
Your body is unknowing

You feel your skin tingling
The feeling is lingering

It feels so cold
Creeping up on young and old

It is not fair
It causes such a scare

You might not see it coming
Or you might already be struggling

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Haha oops. comments 2wice o well.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I like this. nice job. 5\5. and thanks for the comments on my poems:)

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Ok i loved youre poem. im not so sure about the last line"Either way someone will be there caring and loving" but the poem is very detailed it is short but u dont need a long poem for it to be a good one. uuh i llove the whole thing besides the last line rly but im gonna give u a 5\5 anyway. nice job!

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