Again, another great write, I like the word choice in this poem, its sad but you can almost feel thsi poem when reading it, well done.

Very good poem, touching and well spoken. It rhymes very nicely and flows easily, keep up the good work! =D

Beautiful poem.
the flow was flawless.
and you portrayed the emotion very well.
i've been through the same thing.
and it's kinda sad to say. it's been 10 years for me.
i just can't seem to let go. ."/

great write. 5/5.

Wow!!
very powerful poem!!
keep up the great work!!
5/5

<3 i love you silly

I think this one was great, I wasnt a fan of the flow, but thats just a personal opinion. I love that the emotions where really strong and expressed so beautifully with words.

xx
Taegan Emily

So sad
thnx a ton for letting me read your poems
and
thnx many more for the great comments
because
you didn't have to do 4
but
you did
so
thank you
5/5
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

Hmmm... the flow was a little off for me, but i loved the imageryat the beginning... not one of your best but still good i give it a 4/5