Death "a sad story"

by anissa   Jan 5, 2008


The rain falls upon my face
as the tears fill my eyes
and slowly roll down my cheeks
i fall to my knees with a gun in my hands
the rain falls harder and the tears roll faster
wishing you loved me
wishing you didn't hurt me the way you did
but ill make you happy
you said you didn't want to see me anymore

well you wont
ill leave forever
I'm deaths toy now
you hate me
i hate myself
i know what i have to do
ill leave everything behind
I'm leaving this pain
you broke my heart
you destroyed my world...
i cant take it anymore
i love you
I'm sorry...

as i put the gun to my head
i let the bullet take my life
ill let the whisper of death take my life
ill let the pain finely drain and leave
the thoughts of you are no longer here
and now
neither am i

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  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    This is very good :) like that guy there said it shows great emotion. comment bk :)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxTwisteDxxMinDxX

    Wow.. one word.. deep! awesome

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow. this is amazing. i love it. great job. it is filled with so much emotion. and it is so deep. Great Job! 5\5 def.