Wow! thats one luckii gurl :) i like it keep it up

Very good. i really like it. like REALLY like it. lol. i think the length intimedated some ppl casue u have 400and some odd number of visits and only 3 comments. btw 5/5. plz comment on one of mine. thanks

Ok ok ok i like this poem...NO! I LOVE IT! so beautifully written. IT was fantastic. Your poem gives a great imaginery. Write more like these poems. Theis is wonderful. 5/5

-Sarah A.

Oooh wow, ohh my gosh.. Is this true cuz you're 14 too, is it you cuz just made me wanna cry reading this AGAIN! You're Such an AmaZiNg WriTeR!

This is cute and sweet. a wonderful write. i liked it alot because it was different from all the other poems i've read all day.
you did a wonderful job on this one.
job well done.

-ashlei.