I love you like a bird loves its tree
Like a bee loves each and every flower
I love you like a fish loves the sea

Adel,

Little bro...such sweet words you have penned. I hope she reads them and your torture will come to an end.
Hang in there and please try to keep smiling!

Hugs,

Ingrid, your big sis

Very heart felting poem!!!
Good job
keep up the good work

God bless u
Blessful islamic new year to u

Thing is really good

Waaah! so sad ;) had me cryin at the end ><
wonderful poem love it keep it up :D

Great poem i love it very meaning full but sad keep up great work:)

Nice poem as well...
keep it up.
:)

These are the lines that i like the most..

Here I am still waiting for you
As long as I can stand on my feet
But be aware that I can't wait forever
Only life time I can provide

nice poem..best of goodluck..:D

Well done love it very passionate and emotional

Again another wonderful work expressive and emotional, i like it alot .

Wow this is amazing i would give it a 5/5

Omg this is so very sweet. Maybe you should show her this. I'd bet she like it.

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Waw its great feeling u have i like ur writes u r so good i wish u luck and if u need a frind here im.

I loved it, like Rooe said, especialy the verse about loning like the birds love the trees. I thought this rhymed and flowed very well. 5/5

Maash'Allah. :D

This is an amazing poem . i love it , it's a great work.5/5 EXCELLENT

OMG.
So,
but SO
Cute!!

That poem is amazing!!hope you find what youre looking for :)

This is an amazing poem :)

Wow, such a lovely poem.

"But if I have to choose, I will still choose you
Because I know that you care
I need you more than you think I do
You are my drug, my water and my air"

Amazing. Great work.

Salaam Alaykum,
ya rait in hiyya hati'ri. Akeed hathebbak kaman.