Sammy,

You never cease to amaze me. Such a beautiful and heart felt poem....
I love the poem and I love you.

hugs for you, my sweet friend

5/5 Ingrid

Sam
This is beautiful :) The emotions are awesome and so are the word choices.

Loving fingers of light at my window,
Calling me out to embrace the sky.

These lines captured my heart. Just the thought of being able to embrace the sky makes me smile.
Great job!
Love Cindy

This absolutely breath taknig
great work
loved the imagery
keep it up!
takecare:)
Lisa

It wuz good btu im not goin to go to far congrationlating u

Oh my just wow

This poem is amazing
You are a very talented writer :)
keep it up
5/5

This poem is awsome, it was a pleasure to read it! im impressed

if you could, could you check out and comment some of my stuff cheers xx

Great poem! nice use of emotions....

Love it 5/5

Hey really good poem!! i loved the words uve used to capture the readers attention the whole way through. great job!! keep it up 5/5 xx

This poem is really flow beautiful and I like the way capture everything together. Excellent!

Such a pretty poem
awesome flow
and beautiful descriptions
5/5

xx

The imagery is absolutely wonderful in this poem,your rhymes are perfect. very well done.

I read this three times I liked it so well, maybe I will read it a forth you never can tell. The emotions were well placed and like stepping stones I enjoyed the path they made.

Beautiful!

This is beautiful-cant say that i was expecting these sort of poems from your profile-but theyre great!
Wonderful imagery in this poem!!!
I love it!!!
5/5
Aish

Wow! this was simply amazing. i loved every word! i loved how you made everyline rhyme until the end of the poem like you did. i don't think i've ever seen a poem written like that. very creative! and the title was perfect, very unique. all and all this piece was greatt. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I agree with those commenting before me. this was very well written and you chose the right words and placed them perfectly. Nice work here.