I've been in a similar situation... well written keep it up!

Sad, and i know how it feels to love another but not be loved in return. well done :)

If you love him go for him. seeing from afar will hurt you more...

nice poem

Once again it was a good poem, I think to improve this you should use punctuations :) (it's just a suggestion) flow was smooth, keep up the good work.

U r good keep it up! Go after him!

It is sad, but I can feel how much you care. Great visionry, keep up the good work.