My Love Causes My Pain.

by Angel Of Death   Jan 8, 2008


Everynight I lay awake,
Sleeping's so hard to do.
I know to you, I'm a mistake,
But yet I can't stop loving you.

I've tried to forget you,
Tried ignoring you too.
But I can't go 24hours
Without saying a word to you.

You've told me that you miss me,
You always talk like you want me.
But we both want different things,
All you want is to hook up with me.

I should be glad that you're being honest,
Rather than just playing your game.
But I'm still the one that's hurting,
My love's still what causes my pain.

xx love love
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  • 17 years ago

    by Krystal

    I think the last line was the best.
    That line, ftw, totally.

  • 17 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Omg this was amazing. I just went through this whole shit load of an ordeal and I feel this way exactly! this poem helped me realize a lot of things. Thank you so much for writing it. You've got extreme talent.

    Everynight I lay awake,
    Sleeping's so hard to do.
    I know to you, I'm a mistake,
    But yet I can't stop loving you.

    ^^^ this is the stanza that stood out to me the most. It caught my attention and i just cldnt stop reading. plz check out some of my work 5/5
    kat

  • 17 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Love it!!
    Can heaps majorly relate;
    Spesh bout the part about forgetting and ignoring.... Im trying to do that at the moment... Made a new hotmail account lol

    Hmmm; 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by damont

    Wow this is deep. that first verse was deep also. at lest in my opinion. wonderful story though and its told well and kept in poetic form. im sorry for what ya went through though. keep writing.

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