Hold Onto You Love! <3

by Christina   Jan 8, 2008


Once again
you have broken my heart
into pieces
and more pieces

I sit here crying,
but no matter how many tears i cry
you will never be mine
again

I look back
at all the memories
me and you share
and it kills me

I have so much regret
why didn't I fight for you
I just let you slip right from my arms
and leave

I loved you,
you know?
and I wanted to tell you,
but i guess it's too late for that

everyone said I would be better off without you,
but the truth is I'm worse
the pain I feel is breaking me
into pieces

I should have held onto you
and never let you go,
but I did
and now were over

so when you find that other girl
it will kill me, but at least your happy
even if I'm not
your all I care about

so everyone that has something
wonderful with their boo
HOLD ONTO YOU LOVE
and never let go

(this is for a contest so tell me what u think....btw this is a true story bout me and it makes me cry to read this)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissy0590

    Wow great poem... i can relate to this poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Absolutely amazing, doll! sooo soo beautiful. i love your work. i love the part about how you will let him be with another if it makes him happy. even tho it breaks you. you must really really love him.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "I look back
    at all the memories
    me and you share
    and it kills me"

    These lines reminded me of a love I once had. Your thoughts very deep and beautiful in this. another 5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was beautifully written. I love your style always have. I'm sorry that thats a true story that should never happen. But in time you will find the perfect guy. One who will never hurt you just hold on and you will get there.

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This sounds more like a letter than a poem. but it was still very enjoyable. i can relate to it which sometimes can be good in poetry, but for a story like this, no one should be able to relate to it, no one should have to write it.
    5/5
    amazing

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