Pretty sad piece. but it was very well put together :)

Amazing keep up the good work and remember us girls have to stick together

This is a beautiful poem, not just because i need to say it, but because it really is

Cute and heartfilled my kind of poem =)

Good poem dear. i loved itt soo much. it was such a good write. you are truely an amazing writer. great work! !

I really like this one.
You show so much emotion, and i can also relate to this.
Well done

:(
Darn you, you almost made me cry. ;) Lol.
Everything about this one was beautifully done. It flowed perfectly, the emotions were strong (clearly, haha), and the vocabulary was pretty good.

"I'm so broken inside,
Underneath all of the fake smiles,
No one has seemed to even notice,
That I haven't been okay in awhile."
^^ Love this stanza.

Overall: 5.5
Fantastic job, m'dear.

-- Steph <33

[Thanks for the comment on my poem. Sorry it took so long to return the favor.]

What did this person do to get written about to produce such wonderful poetry? this is excellent. these words come from the heart and you seem not only sad but lonely in the sense no one sees your sadness. this is a good poem. keep on writing.

I know how you feel. I'm tormented by thoughts of somebody too. Still trying to make peace.

This is true to the nature of the big fat game of love
it hurts. u did an amazing job puting that hurt into words. congratulatioons. and thank u for this. its a good poem. no scratch that. its an amazing poem.
please comment on my newest poem plz. TY

Your words are mesmerizing. I really love that "won't you give me back my heart" that was a refreshing new way to say things... great writing :}

Very good poem. nice read

Love it.

This is incredibly awesome poem.I love this poem.I could feel your emotions toward that guy.Love this poem. =]

Oh this is sad,but very nice.5/5

Omg i love this poem i live it every day....

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

I loved it kayla, it was great, wonderful job

xXxIchixXx

Kayla... wow, That was... theres no words for it, I love it Darling, i can totaly relate. good job hunny. Love Ya!! <3

-*Alice*-

Ahhh. That is soo sweet. It is so easy to tell that you really like this guy Tyler and I hope everything works out for the best for you!