Excellent Poem, written well liked it.

Keep writing

tc

BlAcK RoSe

Honestly wow! This is one of the greatest poems that I read from you, I really like your idea for it, very original and you expressed emotions on so interesting way with truly good choice of words.
Few lines are totally fantastic and all in all I enjoyed so much in this piece, you wrote it with such passion you mixed sadness with poetic beauty and created this excellent poem. Well done!

Wow, I really liked that one i can relate to it too. Keep it up

I like this piece from the beginning to the end. It is very powerful and emotional, truly greatly written.
You did excellent job with rhymes and created flawless flow in every stanza.
My favorite stanza is:

-With ragged wings
still able to fly
loved to sing
songs that would make any cry.-
^^
Very vivid

Keep up!

Wonderful poem! It is something most people can relate to, and that is sad. I hate to see people have to go through this, but you captured that emotion very well and put it into such an amazing poem that had awesome imagry. Wonderful job here! keep up the great work

Wooww its soo good !! it maked me a little bit cry.
and thanks for your comment :D

xx

Awesome poem.
Very inspiring :)

Hey this was really good. i oved the words used and the way the poe was structured. touching poem 5/5 xx

Hey great poem! i love it!!

I think wering = wearing. If not sorry my mistake =]

I loved this piece, definitly a favorite of yours from which I have read. The meaning behind this was fantastic. Emotionally sad yet really grasped onto my heart. This is beautiful, really beautiful. The flow stunning your word choice elegant. Overall a fantastic read. ~Mel

Amazing. only thought is for you to change a mispell
"Always wering a frown"
it should be "wearing"
5/5

This was good. Although didn't really caught my attention. It's very well written though and the flow was just great. Good job.

.:CiNdY:.

This poem reallr touched me its like i can feel the boys pain that he felt this is amazing

I can relate to this poem. For me I find it hard to ind faith in religion, and in life itself. This poem sort of put it in a different perspective.

Anyways, I enjoyed reading your writing today, and I hope to hear more from you soon.

I really liked this one amazeing write keep up the awesome work 5/5

*~*bee*~*

Excellent piece. Hard to say more than whats already been said. 5/5

I really like the first stanza! It's the best and pulls you right in. So you've made a great opening. (:
The rest of the poem is nice as well, although I would change the last sentence in;
that he just wanted to be true
But that's my opinion, of course. And thank you for your comment.

I love it! its really touching, another 5. you're poems are really deep! keep up the good work

Wow, this is amazing keep it up hun

You are talented It seems you write what you feel and that is best