Nice one....

This is a nice poem, keep it up!!!

Great poem i really like the way you put it all together and how it makes perfect sense

I really like this poem. it really touched my heart!! thanks for your comment on mine

I like it...smooth and simple

So simple to see how you put words together. U r good! this is great! Thanks for the comment on mine, felt thankful.

Wow dat wuz great
i loved it
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5/5

Excellent. you write from the heart

This poem is very easy to relate to and I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job! 5/5

So simple and so good!