Wow. Sad, and beautiful. if this is the first poem you've posted i look forward to more!! great work:)

It's very different..
i really love it..keep postin' more

Unknown...

I can't believe how great your first poem is! Haha you should read my first poem i posted it S.U.C.K.E.D but i just wanted to thank you for all the comments on mine! take care and post more poems! Always

Noelle Wright

That is a awesome poem congrats

Beautifully written poem, Great for you first piece. 5/5. Looking forward to some more.

Thanks

BlAcK RoSe

Weird but beatiful poem

liked it's way of flowing and telling

good luck

Omg, hun!!! Whenever I was first reading this, I was wondering why it was in the depression poems.. then I got to the 4th stanza and realized why. I have no idea what society is coming to these days, but you definitely made a great poem out of it! It was so sad but yet so true because these things happen every single day. Great job, I've never seen a piece like this one before. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

OMG...WOW...5/5

Great.
it really realistic(which really is sad), just the way it flows it's great.

Omg i was blown away You did it again this is an exellent well ritten poen keep it up!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful poem
5/5
loved readin it

wil read more of ur poems next time i log in
thanks for commenting on my poem

love
amy