Wrong

by ShawdowDancer   Jan 11, 2008


He reject me saying that he was tired

Comparing me to another girl

He really made me want to hurl

Why would he do this to me

He has no sympathy

Not caring about the way i feel

And how long it takes to heal

Why would he do this to me

I always cared for the way he felt

I'm rotting like a piece of kelp. :( i was sad:(

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kristi White

    It was great but that last line was... yeah.. i dont know. youre a great writing, you just always have that one like that im wowed by as well as one line that im just like wtf over :} maybe it's just me

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    Umm nothing more nothing, really kind of juvinial..

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