Sittin here drawing circles
by Beautiful Disaster Jan 11, 2008
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Sitting here drawing circles around your name |
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15 years ago
Its an great poem. it make me understand your pain that you are going through, and besides its areally greatly written.all i have to say to critisize it change the format.
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16 years ago
by checkerboard
That is really good, it is a new way of thinking. i would give it a 5!!!!!!!!
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16 years ago
by Harutan
This poem is very good...i love how the format goes into a rhym (spellings bad) near the end, and the whole thing makes me wanna read it again, just to think more about the metaphores in it. 5/5 indeed!
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16 years ago
Awww thats so sweet hun 500/5 fore sure *hugs*
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16 years ago
Interesting write, creative and different from anything I've read before. I like the metaphor of circles.
Nicely written poem.
Well done!
