Empty

by TwistedAngel xx   Jan 12, 2008


Feeling so empty
I am hurting inside

The pain, it is spreading
but where can I hide?

What should I do?
Where can I go?

Do you even see me?
Do you even know?

What you have done to me
That will never go away

That will always be with me
Until my dying day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    Interesting. I liked it, short and sweet once again i can see you favour using less words but you get the message across so it works for you. Nice use of words and shows emotion well. 5/5 well done