I like this poem.
great flow.
good work.

I've heard about this before...sleep paralysis isn't it? Great imagery however the rythm just seemed slightly off in certain parts. It started off well and the last three lines had a good flow but i'm more referring to lines 3 and 4. However certainly a unique poem which i enjoyed reading. xoxo

Great imagery, you have captured the fear you must of felt.

Wow...I've had some interesting dreams but nothing this frightening! You've captured your fears very well in this poem. Great job! 5/5

Very inspiring wonderful flow good poem i really like it! 5/5