Life...

by Brittney   Jan 13, 2008


Treasure each moment,Treasure each gift,
Hold a star and make a wish,
Dream of the things you want to do,
Don't let anyone pressure you, Be you and no-one else, Remember to always stay true to yourself,
Follow the rainbow to that pot of gold,
You never know what your life may hold:)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Nice poem with a great message.. very nicely put! and very true! Good job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    I really like the concept behind this poem however the structure needs work. I would start by adding a more captivating title that gives a better summary of what you are trying to get across to your readers. Then work on making it flow better. However i do like the positive vibe it holds and the message is one that with even more though could do a lot of good to everyone who reads. xoxo

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