This poem is filled with amount of overwhelming emotions that run wild in every stanza. I have to admit that I liked the first part more because this seem so overtaken by flowing rage and the flow suffered from that. All in all, this is written in a good way, still very powerful. I don't like the repetition of the word "hate" in the first stanza.
All these is just my opinion, I don't want to offend you or something like that.

Woah Woah Woah.

First i'll start off with the title: Isn't that an attention grabber haha.

Go **** around with some heartless ***** that will bite you back just as hard
So you can tell me how this ***** feels; now you've left me permanently scarred.

The last lines of this poem were so bitter sweet it had me angry. I don't know how you did it but you flowed anger over my whole body. That hasn't happened before so looks like i've finally found an explict poem which messes with my mind. One thing though sweetie, was the repetition of hate in the first stanza. It wasn't really my thing. I think that's just because it took away the emotion, anger and deepness of the first hate if you know what I mean. Then again It's your poem, your feelings. Your style. So write how you please =D. Overall loved this. Again 5/5 from me. Loved it. Keep writing. ~Mel

P.s Sorry about the starts in the part of your poem I copied. But When I tried to post it how it was it come up like this

"Sorry, we cannot accept you comment since there might be some inappropriate words!"

Ha...

Sweets, I love how you changed it. I think it sounds much better now and the flow is smoothe still. Definitly a good change. Like I told you above a great write. Truely. ~Mel

Its sad..... made me sad....

u have talent

This is really,really wonderful...simply excellent....you did an awesome job describing the pain of realizing things aren't what they seem.Lovely poem!!:)5/5

This is painfully realistic. u grabbed ur hurt and anger and dumped it in this piece of writing. i was going to comment part one but it seemed pointless until i saw the ending.

Go fukc around with some heartless b!#ch that will bite you back just as hard
So you can tell me how this fukc!ng feels; now you've left me permanently scarred.

that was by far a perfect ending.
it swirled rage up into my throat and conjured memories of which no one wants to remember.

it is obvious u were hurt, and leaves nothing to be wondered about.
(i am just now realizing how long this comment is becoming)

so, with that.

BRAVO.

love ya lots,
~sore

Its like a reflection of my own feelings just wonderful