I'm back & i realy enjoyed this poem. i give you 5/5

Wow I like the expression. Keep it up!

Uniquely written... Its an interesting concept as well... I really liked it but the "i" not being capitalized annoyed me a bit lol. (grammar freak) But besides that the poem was amazing and worthy of a 5/5!

The repeating makes the poem different from all others.... its hard to do and pull it off. You did it but barely... try making the flow and little more...... flowlyier.... lol weird word... anyway i did like it just you could be a lot better but we all need practice....

Keep it up

Definalty a 5/5 great expression and it is different from other poems i have read...keep up the great work