Exellent....i loved it

Hey Constance;

Once again G.R.E.A.T poem i love how at the beginning its about how her Dad told her good things about life and everything and then at the end he was like a child molester...Its a sad but true subject don't always believe your eyes ...b/c they don't always know the whole story && once again Connie Great poem! keep it up!!

5.5

Noelle Wright

Okay, wow.... I can totally relate to the first few stanzas, but then the last stanzas just hit like that THAT! I cannot believe the twist in this poem, it really catches you off guard. Nontheless, amazing, brilliant, I loved it. My heart goes out to those who have been through this. Great job, darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I agree with Kayla, Noelle, Bria.....they said it all!!!! GREAT job!!!!!!!!!

*tears*
thats so sad.
but this poem had perfect flow, good stanzas, good word choice, it's truely an excellient peice of work.
-stephanie

Very strong poem... keep up the good work

Shocking, heart wrenching, brilliantly written. 5/5. Thanks for your comment and vote. P.S. You look damn good for your age!

Wow i really like the way u exspress urslf gr8 poem once agen wow.........

stacey xoxoxox

Wow this is a sad poem but it has a great flow to it i love it

2x wow amazing poem haz so much meaning. hope u keep up great work!

Sad poem but it has a great flow
tabby