It's beautiful.
There's this mystic trance it puts you in.
And the title is perfect, intriguing and beautiful.
Well done =)
5/5.

Wow another great poem!!!
keep up the great work!
4/5

<3 i love you silly

It's short and it has a nice message into it... it's not one of your best but i can say it's good.. =D

Ooohhh. I like that one. Such feeling. I can feel what you want in your heart. Welcome to the club, even at your age.